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CIRCLE OF LIFE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:17:14 PM in AEST
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'CIRCLE OF LIFE"
Optical illusion, our circle of life.
Pendulum masters, guiders of our life's outcome?
Carefully planned good, or uncontrolled strife?
Constant merry -go- 'round, jumping for your freedom?
"Peer pressue," unforseen circumstances, all 'round!
Optical illusion is life, what you dream, not found?
Whirling, Twirling, Twisting, Curling Circle.....
Sacrificing o'r, and o'r...fearful, dreaded cycle!
Lines may be drawn, as life goes 'round and 'round.
Sharp curves, screeching brakes, horrible sound
Life goes faster and faster, there's no slowing down!
Freedoms are threatened, your life is shutdown!
What goes around, comes back around to you
Circle of Life is your choice, genuinely true.
Unending circles always bend, seeing yours in view.
Predictable, premeditated, treatment of others, "You."
Circle your life, make a slow judgment of "You."
Kind hearts attract those with like hearts view.
Again, a full circle, what kind of heart do you project?
Hearts buried deeply to protect, or open heart's to detect?
Merry-go-rounds of life must pause for introspect.
Hurting hearts, not one has escaped this hurtful affect!
Wounds can be healed as your circle is completed
Slow down for the curves, each curve a year dated.
Simple "Golden Rule" goes around too!
"Do until others as you, would have them do to you!"
And when the trips around your Circle are through.....
Will your "Circle of Life" vindicate your life's view?
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"Negative thoughts are like birds, you can't
keep them from flying around your head,
but you can keep them from building nests
in your hair!"
~Kenneth Hagin~
*Positive Smiles*
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
March 21, 2004
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:34:59 PM AEST
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Connie, this is excellent. Yes, we are all in control of our own 'circle'. Don't put anything out there in your circle you would not like to return to you. Choices, choices, choices and a little forethought and common sense can make a big difference in the 'boomerange effect' that can and does generally happen.
Rita |
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by bernard on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 02:38:04 PM AEST
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| Well done a complete circle of life a fantastic vision. The longer I live the more I see of what you have so well written. thanks from bernard. |
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 05:02:35 PM AEST
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Absoluteely beautiful...well done, Cinnie....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 07:08:37 PM AEST
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| connie, this is beautiful, keep writing my friend, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:41:01 PM AEST
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| Critters, this is quite the write you got yourself here. Made my mind go at a thousand paces. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:45:58 PM AEST
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Hi Mom,
This is great and oh so true.
luv, huggs, your brat,
emy |
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Re: CIRCLE OF LIFE
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:30:10 PM AEST
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I had this one
this roundly thought
and round and round
did I go..
a kaleidoscope of thoughts this merry go round ride you have given to us. SO many truths, wisdom and lore...but it does has a dizzying effect as if I am spinning too fast by the currents of life... |
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