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My Mistake

Contributed by TwEeK on Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 05:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

Here i stand driping blood,
My prey lying still on the ground,

I then throw the blade I used to kill,
An evil grin spreads across my face,

I laugh histaricly in spite of myself,
"Ok" i think "so i killed him, my boyfriend"

My whole body clenches in horror ,
What on earth have i done,

I have killed the one i only love,
This can't be true,

I glance at the body just to make sure,
But no its still him,

Nothing now can take him back,
"I'm som stupid, I've killed the wrong guy!?"

What more can i do now,
I'll only make thing's worse,

I'm so stupid I don't deserve to live,
He did,

I'll lie here for hours by his cold stiff side,
Hopeing and praying for a miricale,

None will come,
Not to me and thats a fact,

So I must right my wrong,
I set out for the one who was to be first,

"Hello my dear, fine night for a killing?"
Another evil grin replaces my somber expression,

I thrust in deep and hear him scream,
Now i must run,

Back to his body,
I kiss his blood dried lips,

"I'm Sorry"
I then take up the blade to my chest,

"See you in hell my love"
The pain makes me smile in relish,

I colapse apon my loved one dead,
Glad that i now had finally done something right for a change.

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-03-22 17:37:23]
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