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Out my Door
Contributed by
twinkletoes
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 09:50:42 PM in AEST
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You said I lost you today
Cause baby you wont stay
In my life of broken smiles
And shattered dreams.
You go wrap him in your love
And in a swirl of misery
I hear you say
"Dont ring me anymore
Dont want to talk to you no more
And if you see me walkin
On the street
Dont love me anymore
I wont love you anyway!"
Baby, baby! You make
My knees go weak!
Oh shes gone now
Yeah shes gone now
Ill miss her sweet love
And Ill miss her sweet lips
Of honey gold.
Oh baby
I miss your lovin ways
As the hours turn into days
We were the right thing
For us I just knew
But your gone forever more
As you walked
Right out my door
I heard you say
"Dont ring me anymore
Dont want to talk to you no more
And if you see me, walkin
On the street
Dont love me any more
I wont love you anyway!"
Baby, baby! You make
My knees go weak.
Thats for sure
Youve gone and walked
right out my door
Thats for sure!
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twinkletoes
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2004-03-22 21:50:42]
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Re: Out my Door
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by poet_of_anger on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 10:00:57 PM AEST
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Yes, Rock is good. Nice song
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Re: Out my Door
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:27:32 AM AEST
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| Very nice song, done in the style of ye olde rock and roll times. Well done! |
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Re: Out my Door
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:24:51 AM AEST
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| A talented write....venkat |
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Re: Out my Door
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 06:44:35 PM AEST
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Hey those ol' twinkletoes were tappin' when you wrote this one! i can hear the double bass thumping from here! good song love to hear it performed.
wildejohnny |
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