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The End
Contributed by
jamsters
on
Monday, 22nd March 2004 @ 11:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Standing in
the pool of
blook
Watching
you fall to
your knees
Surrendering
I laugh at
every whimper
in pity
Nothing can save
you now!
I raise the
bloody dagger
over
head
Coming toward
you
I see the
other side of
the dagger
poking out
of your
neck
Copyright ©
jamsters
... [
2004-03-22 23:03:34]
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Re: The End
(User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:45:14 AM AEST
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| I guess you're not exactly the type who goes for parties at the beach to bask in the sunshine, aye? Kidding. Nicely written poem, very dark and gory. |
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