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Two Sides of Me
Contributed by
bluoreo
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 06:53:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm alert
I'm strong
I'm warmed
I'm fearless
I'm loved
I love
I try again
I laugh
I'm up
I smile
I'm mended
I'm tired
I'm weak
I'm cold
I'm fearful
I'm hated
I hate
I give up
I cry
I'm down
I frown
I'm broken
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2004-03-23 06:53:59]
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Re: Two Sides of Me
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:53:57 AM AEST
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| awe.. sounds like your in love and happy then you lost the love and now your sad.. awe.. funny how we interpret poems.. but this is how I read it.. awe... good poem...sandy |
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Re: Two Sides of Me
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by Princesaazul16 on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 08:23:52 AM AEST
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| I like this poem a lot because it reminds me of myself, one moment I can be happy and strong then the next I got defeated so now im broken into pieces. Well good write! Keep up the good work, I liked it a lot. ~Stace~ |
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