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A blurry box
Contributed by
danimus
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:12:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Brights of a life traveling to the west
Has disregarded any signs of a car wreck
While she drives home after a knighting
Shes edgy and soon becomes frightened
Slight fear, She breaks the car to a slow
But the oncoming car doesnt think so
The motions collide and wreck on impact
If she feels it she wouldnt come back
Lights appeared blinding when not alive
Trapped under a blurry box but didnt survive
A patients nightmare becomes her story
When an incoherent man pleads hes sorry
He claimed to do no evil and it wasnt wrong
A death on his hands and now shes gone
How could I stop? How could I erase?
Birth was a gift, not to deface
Copyright ©
danimus
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2004-03-23 11:12:06]
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Re: A blurry box
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 06:02:49 PM AEST
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the imagery in this is surreal, strong... great write! ;0)
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