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Scattered Skittles
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:22:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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He knew the world from head to toe
And drank the sunlight noon
His whispers with the wind did go
A duet with the moon
He followed clouds throughout the winds
Where feathered ice untame blows
On grassy knees and seconds pinned
His tongue could catch the rain's bows
He shared his smile with butterflies
And spoke roses perfume
His eyes competed with the skies
His laughter in full bloom
His feet could take him cross the world
And thoughts could sail the sea
A book in bed with stories curled
The Princess and the Pea
He thought adults were bigger kids
Until McDonalds banned him
His years too tall beyond the lid
And logic seduced whim
The books would never seem to end
A drowning sea of words
And numbers lurked around each bend
Why cut each pie in thirds?
Doors became his prison cell
And books usurped his glee
Algebra defeated him
The princess lost her pea
He dreamed to stroll the skies again
And splash rivers beyond where pain goes
But his eyes closed in hope, there the dying begins
hed forgotten the taste of rainbows
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EternitysLyre
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2004-03-23 11:22:30]
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Re: Scattered Skittles
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:44:53 PM AEST
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oh wow... i'll never forget that taste, it's too much to bear - growing old doesn't mean you forget things like that! lol, i'll shuddup... good write! ;0)
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Re: Scattered Skittles
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:50:59 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Rainbows are my favorite things. I have them daily in my life. Skittles too by the way.
Rita |
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Re: Scattered Skittles
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:28:21 AM AEST
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| very nice jj, i really like how you said,"rain's bows" and ended with "he’d forgotten the taste of rainbows", brings it all together very nicely, keep writing, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Scattered Skittles
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:37:26 AM AEST
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| As always, your poetry speaks with an intelligent voice beyond your years ... an interesting and enthralling write ... Jan |
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Re: Scattered Skittles
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 09:10:34 PM AEST
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omg this is divine. you have a remarkable way with painting pictures in the depths of my soul. absolutely unprecedented. :) keep writing... you have a fan.
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Re: Scattered Skittles
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 03:26:53 PM AEST
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I know I've commented once before but I just had to read it again because you just have to know how good it is... I miss the taste of rainbows. And I love the very very last line. *sigh*
Lindsey |
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