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like talking to a shadow
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:33:04 PM in AEST
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it was like listening to mountains grow,
i spoke so softly only a leaf could hear me,
deep in solemn hour of midnight,
breathing sweet thoughts of neverwhere,
counting time by months and years,
breathe of tears; yesteryears,
creativity and emotions quite clear,
uninhibited allowing natural expression,
quenched by nights shining moon, i hear,
hearts and minds remaining pure,
validating recognition of feelings,
natures dance of perfect harmony,
intoxicating breaths inhaling sweetest air,
of consciousness in freedoms pure delight,
essence of loves purity igniting asteroids aflame,
refreshing starlight balancing earthly duality,
as when again embraced in dreams,
honoring of ones original nature,
freeing egos sense of security,
songs of natures sweet melody,
consuming rapture in momental silence,
pure essence of freedom in the wind,
perception and awareness finely caressed,
earths divine wisdom being expressed,
listening to these mountains grow,
whispering so softly only a leaf could hear me,
deeply in solemn hour of midnight,
breathing sweet thoughts of neverwhere,
breathe of life, counting time by sighs,
breathing roses; now aware.
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:39:59 PM AEST
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Awww hun! Its beautiful! Excellent write *hugs*
Missing you bunches
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:41:57 PM AEST
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A very serene write, a quiet journey of the soul, observing what is often overlooked.
Your words have reached my heart and soul,
hugs
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:42:47 PM AEST
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this is so soft and beautiful, but I feel a great sadness in it too. (((Nessa)))
makes me sigh....
Roses at your feet :o)
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 01:55:47 PM AEST
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your poetry never fails nessa this was so beautifu and the grace shows through
5 long stems for you
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by AnGeL_M on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 02:41:00 PM AEST
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WoW This Is Awesome
I Loved It...Great Write
As Always You Do So Very Well..
,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 03:14:04 PM AEST
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vivid and beautiful Nessa I can hear those mountains grow all around you
michelle |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 04:15:05 PM AEST
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Wow amazing peaceful poem! I couldn't stop from picturing the scene! Your poetry is so awesome! It always leave me in a dreamy state! Amazing write!
Anne :D:D |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:17:42 PM AEST
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| It is because of Poetess' like you that I feel privileged to not only read these works but to have found this site. This one was breathtaking and a masterpiece. Kie |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:32:34 PM AEST
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So peaceful Nessa, like hearing the corn grow. When I left my heart in the mountains of Colorado and moved to Illiois....was like another time for me......but I looked an found their beauty too! I could hear the corn grow. But someday, I'm going home back to the mountains and listen to them grow again.
Exquiite Delight! Made me home sick
I haven't felt that way in 25 years!
Very touching poem indeed
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:36:53 PM AEST
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listening to these mountains grow,
whispering so softly only a leaf could hear me,
deeply in solemn hour of midnight,
breathing sweet thoughts of neverwhere,
breathe of life, counting time by sighs,
breathing roses; now aware.
This was excellent i love that line listening to these mountains grow, great work.
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 05:40:57 PM AEST
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| Awww Nessa, what a beautifully written piece. @~~~~ to you my friend. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by twinkletoes on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:28:14 PM AEST
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whamo, slam dunk.........you've done it again.
beautiful............
tt |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:03:44 PM AEST
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| Great write! Well done on the words in this it just captured a beautiful picture! Christina |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:12:03 PM AEST
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Only you, Nessa, could so quietly yet powerfully emote these feelings and thoughts. You are truly the 'Lady' of YPDC.
Many hugs,
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by New_York_Chick on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:34:25 PM AEST
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truly the best
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:37:25 PM AEST
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PRETTY & PRECIOUS,AS THAT OF A ROSE!
IT'S BEST,WHEN THE ONLY VOICE YOU CAN HEAR,IS THAT OF YOUR OWN-SOME-
TIMES!! NICE MOTION OF DEVINE DEVOTIONS-YOU & A DREAM!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:17:11 AM AEST
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Soft, charming, tender very beautiful poem....
lovely expression of nature..Ooh..thanks Nessa..love and hugs. venkat |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by badlander on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:56:51 AM AEST
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Wow!! I am so very humbled. I think I will now reach into my ear with an extremely white hot acetylene torch and sear what I thought was a mind that could possibly transfer thought into words. I now know better. Perhaps I would be better suited as a dog slave lapping at your feet hoping for a crumb of genius to fall my way. It's nice to be in the same universe as thou.
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:30:13 AM AEST
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Girl when u get back up u come back with a vengence!
Very powerful, awesome, beautifull, masterpeice!
It rocks!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:28:40 AM AEST
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| I see words drawn from deep within - timeless and beautiful ... I'm in awe of your talent ... hugs Jan |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by doug on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:39:31 AM AEST
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This poem makes me feel deeply and thats
what i look for in a poem. you have put my writing to shame but thats ok cause it is worth it to read your words your friend doug |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by faithmairee on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:28:55 AM AEST
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Prissy...Brilliant work! This is truly awesome...i loved this poem.
Faith |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:21:49 PM AEST
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wow Nessa, this is so very beautiful...
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 07:50:32 PM AEST
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Simply amazing!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: like talking to a shadow
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by Soulless on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 11:21:32 PM AEST
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The expressions and blossoming words cut soo deeply into this poem, I absolutely love how they fall in place together to create another fabulous poem, this I think is my favorite.
Kisses,
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