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The Unfixable Problem
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:06:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Swimming in pools of sorrow,
I am your broken toy.
You gave and gave,
but I broke despite your best efforts.
You do not talk to me directly,
but to someone else in the room and
discuss me.
As if I wasnt there
and didnt have
a say.
I try my best
to fix myself,
to not be such a problem.
Im sorry I cause you trouble,
Im sorry I cause you frustration.
But I am the unfixable problem.
Eventually you toss me aside,
in the pit of despair to
collect yourself.
You pick me up,
your favorite doll,
the one with all the tears.
You hug me and
attempt to fix me,
once again.
I try to cooperate,
I really do!
But your love is just
too draining.
I have no strength to fix myself.
You would fix me,
but fixing costs money,
I do not want to be more of a problem by
causing you to spend too much money.
You shove me into
someone else and say,
Fix it!
as if they have
a magical cure or
device.
But they cant repair me--
I am the unfixable problem.
Stop trying to label it.
Stop trying to label me!
Your problem has a name!
Your problem has opinions!
Your problem wants to be free...
You try to ignore the fact that
my eyes are coming undone,
that my limbs need re-stitching.
So you hug me and squeeze me,
weakening the seams,
until I fall apart.
Strewn in a million pieces.
What else did you expect?!
I am your unfixable problem!
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
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2004-03-23 19:06:12]
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Re: The Unfixable Problem
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 07:12:46 PM AEST
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a big fat poetic mess, erg... good way to put it into words! i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: The Unfixable Problem
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by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 08:27:05 PM AEST
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Whoa.. um where to begin.. This is very good in my opinion. I havnt read anythin yet such as this/something so seldomly seen.. You had me from the start to finish.. which is hard to capture thoughts so pure and relate them to make a whole... no missing pieces no other words needed.. you have a great mind.. but are defeating the purpose of strength.. you know your unner self.. now let it out.. unwind your being..
excellent work.. keep it up :)
~neglected1~ |
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Re: The Unfixable Problem
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 09:43:31 PM AEST
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lots of emotion.....its so good though,its just words but the words r so strong..keep up the good work^_^
luv always |
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Re: The Unfixable Problem
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:02:07 PM AEST
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| Great poem and I liked the title a lot. |
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Re: The Unfixable Problem
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:22:27 AM AEST
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| I really loved this...reminds me of being loved to death. |
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Re: The Unfixable Problem
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:40:26 AM AEST
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| great job worthless, this is really amazing. you have a way with words. i really enjoy your writing. please share MORE! |
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