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The Pain
Contributed by
cheech
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:44:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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with one kiss we can begin something
with two kisses we can make sure
with three kisses i'm sure this is magic
ya right this is just what i've been hoping for
i've been wanting this to happen for a long time
now you're gona,not far,this is good-bye
i'm gonna move on,til the day that i die
the pain is causing so much fustration
the pain is causing so much aggrevation
the pain is causing so much temptation
the pain is causing so much hesitation
i can go on forever and forever,but never never
in your selfish arms,will u say i love you ever
you act so stupid,but i know you're so much clever
than them,one last time i've got love fever
i wish you could have realized all the things i've kept inside
it ment alot to me to have you by my side
when you'd never showed up i would cry
so many things go on in this empty head
this head is so empty its dead
sleeping all alone in the bed
so many things go on in this empty head
doing things i wanna do,i think i'm wasting my time
i think i should just go
somethings i do is a crime
the pain is causing so much fustration
the pain is causing so much aggrevation
the pain is causing so much temptation
the pain is causing so much hesitation
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Re: The Pain
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:13:50 PM AEST
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your poem reminds me of one I wrote called Colors Of The Heart... one particular color though... orange...
Some hearts are orange...
They do not love just one or even a few
No... they love may...
On fire all the time for someone new
But in this case u have a twist... the pain that this particular someone is giving u... a bit different there... lol
Good poem though... keep on writing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: The Pain
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:28:52 AM AEST
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| I feel the pain...whatever you're doing...I feel it. |
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