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Collide on Film
Contributed by
merry
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Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 10:57:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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______________________ rusty soup cans prominent decorations on the front lawn wobbling bicycle wheels cracks in the sidewalk cry for repair hot wind blows down the alleyway leaving me alone in the barrio stifling memories slow motion captures the essence of time and place collide on film in the late afternoon red orange sun burns up the street it's a wrap.....
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2004-03-23 22:57:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Collide on Film
(User Rating: 1 ) by blueheart on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:03:26 PM AEST (User
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You summarized the Hollywood world well enough. :) |
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Re: Collide on Film
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:21:06 PM AEST (User
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excellent!! brilliant!! *taps foot waiting for movie to release* lol, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Collide on Film
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:28:18 PM AEST (User
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It amazes me that every time I read your writes I see everything in my mind sooo clearly. Your pen is magic Gaille, truly.
Very well done
Roses
Larry |
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