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Jealousy the killer
Contributed by
tecnorobo
on
Tuesday, 23rd March 2004 @ 11:46:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Jealousy the killer,
It murdered me tonight.
Staring in my bloodshot eyes, it tore the remnants of a shattered heart.
Burning what was left after, Anger so strong tears of blood surfaced.
Envy would have never come,
And it wasnt what you said,
But what you didnt.
I know our eyes met.
I know you saw.
I know you werent scared.
I also know this
Im so tired of waiting for the day youll come and save me from myself.
I know I met you.
I know I met you.
Will you be different the third?
Knowing equals my dejection.
I wish you knew desire killed me.
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Re: Jealousy the killer
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by MOTOXRCR on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:20:19 AM AEST
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Excellent piece. I especially liked this part:
"I’m so tired of waiting for the day you’ll come and save me from myself.
I know I met you.
I know I met you.
Will you be different the third?"
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