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15
Contributed by
coaster
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 12:52:50 AM in AEST
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Ya that's right, I'm only fifteen
All blind spots seem to have been seen
All thoughts are before, after, and not between
Balancing on what's mine and I don't need to lean
Locked up and hidden with all my sense of security
The days and nights all but make up my reality
Though I'm just another youth part of society
Only to come to realize that this is why I am me
Copyright ©
coaster
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2004-03-24 00:52:50]
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Re: 15
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by MOTOXRCR on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:14:43 AM AEST
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| This poem envokes a lot of feeling that a teenager would go through in a very detailed, mature manner... Nice piece of writting. |
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Re: 15
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:29:35 AM AEST
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| That pretty much sums up what I felt when I was 15, which was just last year. Great job. |
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