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Being Thankful
Contributed by
Rylo
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:07:58 AM in AEST
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As the night grew long,
i laid out on my front lawn.
Looking to the stars above,
telling God how thankful i was
for love.
I told God i was thankful for,
all things he has given me. He
gave me life, and a caring family.
He has given me choices to make
on my own, and he has let me
see things, that were meant
to be shown.
I am thankful for air that
i breath, and i am thankful
for the flowers and the sea.
Without all this the beauty
of our land, would not be.
To see a dear eating clover,
and to see a rabbit running
in the pasture. Are some of
Gods greatest gifts, and i
am thankful for all of this.
I thank you Lord for all you
have done, and i am thankful
for the favor of the day, and
for being able to have fun.
Most of all God i am thankful
for having you to look up to,
and for the sins you have washed
away. For i know without you,
there would be no other way.
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Rylo
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Re: Being Thankful
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by Remy on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:13:47 AM AEST
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lovely tribute... sounds as if easter is comnig, lol. joking... i like this! ;0)
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Re: Being Thankful
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:40:51 AM AEST
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Wow, I hear every powerfull word of this!
Awesome!
luv, huggs,
emy
Thank ya kindly for your comments on my work.
luv, huggs, praise,
emy |
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Re: Being Thankful
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:57:37 PM AEST
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beautiful
michelle |
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Re: Being Thankful
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 12:41:14 AM AEST
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Stunning poem in every way.You are wise beyond your words and will make me think to look twice at each little beauty God has to offer us.Kudos on a gifted piece,
PumpkinPie
P.S:I'm sure God loves this piece as much as me ! |
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