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Love
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:33:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What, oh what
Can true love be?
For it shackles while
It sets me free
The fullest joy
The deepest pain
What is love?
I ask again
Many a war
For love was fought
Too many have died
When love forgot
Yet many men
By love were saved
Twas a girl who saved them
From the grave
Love can become
Stronger than all
When to his fullest
Man follows her call
Too many times
Love has died out
When watered not
The seed wont sprout
Love must be watered
From the start
Then it will blossom
Within the heart
Watched over with
The utmost care
Love will guide you
Anywhere
Just trust in her
With all your heart
Believe in love
And never part
And never, never
Forget love
For its a taste
Of heavn above
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-03-24 03:33:52]
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Re: Love
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:48:14 AM AEST
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this is true and so beautifully written, and look, writing as you do, in a heartfelt way, there is one more breathtakingly lovely love poem for the world to breathe in and enjoy:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Love
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by sircolin on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:48:28 AM AEST
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A NICE POEM OF LOVE AND I AGREE WITH YOU THAT LOVE MUST GO ON . AND THE WORLD MUST KNOW MORE ABOUT LOVE FOR LOVE IS NOT A DREAM ITS REAL IT BRINGS ONES TOGTHER , AND I BELIVE SOON THE WORLD WILL KNOW LOVE AND PEACE
FROM COLIN AND AGAIN LOVELY POEM |
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Re: Love
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:10:46 AM AEST
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U have shown many faces of luv.
Beautifull!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:44:13 PM AEST
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Hmm. One might almost think you're in love.
Immature younger teenagers. Sigh.
OK, I liked it. Just dont let me see you sniffing roses, or I'll shoot you.
You-know-who. |
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Re: Love
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:37:50 PM AEST
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so beautiful. i loved every word of this. well written. awesome job.
Arden |
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Re: Love
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by MissMandy on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 01:12:58 AM AEST
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Wow... this reminds me of mine with the same title... Love is an icredibly messed up thing... doncha think?
Nice write!
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Re: Love
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:46:23 PM AEST
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Written from the heart. I hope that you still feel this way.
Ann |
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