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Twenty-Two
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:44:37 AM in AEST
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Oh the number
Twenty-two
Amazes me
Surprises you
So many things
To think about
Its easier, though
If you can count
The sum of eleven
And eleven more
And half of the number
Forty-four
Two-hundred twenty-two
Divided by ten
And that times one
Twenty-two again!
Oh what an interesting
Inside joke
And well doth it
The thought provoke
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wachumiri
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by badlander on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:24:39 AM AEST
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| VIENTE-DOS !! I think I dig this poem the most. |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 06:25:35 PM AEST
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David, David, DAVID...
get a life |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:49:34 PM AEST
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I'll echo Littleblondegirl here. There's an echo of your dad in there too!
This is a dangerous attempt at lowering yourself to the level of rhymester. You know what your mama always said... your face will stay that way.
HOWEVER, I will say that I enjoy the number too. It's a kind of ammunition, very inexpensive, easy to handle and fun.
Watch your topknot.
Andrew |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by arden on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 09:35:11 PM AEST
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lol ok then. you got alot of time on your hands lol jk.
really cute. i liked it.
Arden |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 10:57:34 PM AEST
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oh david, extremely clever and well written, how you did this blows me away, its perfect:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by JennyFruFru on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:29:39 PM AEST
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| if u only understood how strange i found this but in a good way... :) :) :) |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:19:13 PM AEST
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WOW!!! I actually inspired a poem?! I couldn't have written it better myself. What an awesome number! I'll just be waiting for that subway poem now!
Love ya tonz and more,
Carrie (eat fresh 22 times)
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 08:51:27 PM AEST
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You know, Carrie told me she's obsessed with that number... I imagine it's sort of like me and the number 3, but...According to Tootsie Pops: "The world may never know"
Cute write.
Lotsa love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd August 2004 @ 04:54:34 PM AEST
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Twenty-two works for me, too. I don't know the joke, but you wrote an interesting poem about something as mundane as a number. I found it well-written and unfaltering in its rhythm.
I think 22 was a good year in my life. As far as I can remember, at any rate.
Thanks for the read. |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:44:22 PM AEST
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This is a clever and whimsical write.
Not everything has to be about life, death, and love.
Ann |
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Re: Twenty-Two
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2020 @ 02:58:42 AM AEST
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//
The title of this poem attracted me and I am so glad that I stopped in to read it! I have something in common with that friend. Yeah, that number. I haven`t a clue why I like twenty two. Perhaps because of the 22 scadoo. Pick a number...I think 22.
Absolutely one of my favorite poems now.
Thank you ever so much for posting this and sharing it with us non-insiders. |
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