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Free?
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:22:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im sitting here with a knife to my wrist,
want it to take the pain, the love Ive missed
want the knife to cut, want my skin to bleed
Its like a symbol of death, a drug I need
My thoughts drift as I make up this rhyme,
the thought is free, even my last time.
They drift to the times I was let down in my life
it seems they are all bound in the edge of the knife.
I think of the people I loved, the people who cared
think of the thoughts I thought we shared
But things are different when the truth comes out
its hard to see the positive side, give the benefit of
doubt
Someone once told me that life is hard
told me you cant play it like a card
But when it all boils down its like a game
everyone hunts for, seeks for the fame.
I feel like I started behind all other players
with no chance to finish, not even with prayers.
I could have finished, if others I could trust
but they all let me down, carry on I must.
When people of your own blood let you down,
you know its time to just let yourself drown.
People I loved and cared for, betrayed me
thats what it feels like, at last Ill be free .
Ive got nothing to live for, nothing to love
I want to fly away, want to fly like a dove.
I push down on the knife, my skin turns red
my body is free, the grief, it has fled.
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2004-03-24 13:22:40]
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Re: Free?
(User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 01:48:49 PM AEST
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Amazing....Your words flow like a raging river..Beautiful as well as deep.
Incredible write, you've said what I could not.
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