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Black ropes down my face
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 03:54:46 PM in AEST
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I revel in the attention from the night.
The moons spits its fire whilst artists hum tunes of their gloom.
I saw you watching me,
curled up spiral in a tree,
its roots a purple hue,
your gaze bewildered indigo view.
No hate in the air tonight,
from your crumpled smile, life is all worth while,
all hail the pregnant virgin.
Here I am, the boy in love,
we share the humor and spontanious arguing in the Garden of Eden.
Black ropes down my cheeks,
you whisper and I flinch,
this is the time when everyone likes to lynch...
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2004-03-24 15:54:46]
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Re: Black ropes down my face
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:21:46 PM AEST
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| good writing |
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Re: Black ropes down my face
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by little_genna on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:52:18 PM AEST
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This is very thought provoking. I feel like i know you from somewhere from the way you write.
stace |
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Re: Black ropes down my face
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:56:56 PM AEST
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beautiful write!
I love the part when you said
"Black ropes down my cheeks,
you whisper and I flinch,"
It made me think about all of the hidden meaning, not just in that alone but in the poem as a whole.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Black ropes down my face
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by jade_elephant on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 05:24:18 PM AEST
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| i have no idea what this one means, you have to let me know then i'll comment properly. x |
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Re: Black ropes down my face
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by bleeding_chains on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 12:53:31 PM AEST
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| this is a great write. i love the title. |
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