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License Not Required
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:09:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Absence of mind, soul and body Lack of self-control Balcony view of the fall beneath you Back track and give back every heart you stole.
Collaborate in a scheme of bad ideas Hear the music from another room Disposable hunger and loss of vision A long distance relationship full of doom.
Energetic fingers type out a love song Bringing the audience to its knees Freakish occurrences with belated apologies You cant see the forest because of the trees.
Gullible daughters and a will to live Bleeding in battle means youve already won Humorous lines with fading glory We fight the wars but lose our sons.
Inhibitions lost and never uncovered Deadly plagues invade our town Justified forces of an alien mob Venture into your own world of lost and found.
Kindness and security give way to stupidity Fondling yourself because it passes time Lacerations of the back and neck Touching yourself has become a crime.
Molestation gives way to personal pleasures Ripping apart at the seams Neglecting your need for relaxation Haunted by all your dreams.
Original sin and stipulation Fielding questions from the news Penetration seems almost perfect Setting yourself up to lose.
Quote a celebritys asinine opinion With a certain shade of green Resilience worn like a drenched puppy Cover your face because you dont want to be seen. Sexuality chased with alcohol Like a chewable animal vitamin Temptation of salvation And starting a fight again.
Understanding in an accident Drown in a pool of your blood Violent burden unaware Of exactly where you stood.
Willing to change your future By talking to a star X-ray vision erases everything Drowning your symptoms at the bar.
Yesterday it ended and today it began Again you fell into the abyss Zodiac-type pinstripe perspective But that is something you will never miss.
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2004-03-24 16:09:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: License Not Required
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dying_Angel on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:12:51 PM AEST (User
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all i can say is wow.. |
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Re: License Not Required
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 04:36:29 PM AEST (User
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goddamn. i loved that. and my appreciation of other people's work is becoming rare these days. but this piece was well thought out, well worded, and it actually had a message, rather than just being some pointless drivel slopped together for comments.
"great write" or "good job" wouldn't do this justice, so i'll just say it's the best i've read in awhile.
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