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traar tragedy
Contributed by
tragic_downfall
on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:41:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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sleepiness is beating on me as i write this letter...
and my hands are shaking as i scribble down these words...
how could something that seems so simple take a lot out of me?..
tears accompanied by numbing pain are the results of your deadly words...
my friends and my guts tell me, this would get worst...
i know this would get worst...
im too weak to hold you inside my arms...
yet strong enough to not to show what im hiding...
my insides are churned and my heart's heavily bleeding...
again you proved that im useless... im nothing...
those dark clouds sympathize with me...
something no other human specially you would ever do...
ive never seen myself smile for quite some time now...
and i hate it because youre the only one who could re-teach me how...
my throat is swelling... still im screaming and crying for you...
and again, i hate it because youre the only one who can pull me through...
why is it so hard to turn my back from you... could i move on?..
and with this tragic downfall of mine i will prove...
to this world that a whisper could silence a beating heart...
tear it into pieces and wont give you a second chance...
to go back to start...
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2004-03-24 17:41:09]
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Re: traar tragedy
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by Benny on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:47:05 PM AEST
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i very much enjored your description of your drying,
a very well written poem,
use of half rhyme in the first stanza is creates quite a good intro.
thankyou
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