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White Clouds
Contributed by
twinkletoes
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:01:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Gaily we danced our youth away
In the old dance halls
Not caring what the future held
Nor of the coming dark Hun hordes.
We would walk in the gardens
Make love in the park
As white clouds sailed o head
Of children, wed remark.
You are taken from me now
By Jerrys brutal blitz
I remember the night well
When I kissed your bloodied lips.
I fly my weapon through the air
Sending hatred and despair
In the form of deadly flame
To a mothers son up there.
My pain I feel, does not subside
As I see their last death spin
Nor will it ever end
When this war we win.
A quiet time I dream of
One day when I can fly
My beautiful Merlin engined steed
Through white clouds up in the sky.
But in each white cloud I see your face
With your smile that will never fade
I dream of what could have been
And what we could have made.
Copyright ©
twinkletoes
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2004-03-25 00:01:40]
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Re: White Clouds
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:26:54 AM AEST
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oooo! this is so sad, so very moving, vivid, chillingly, real, im not sure what the 'war chest' is..... but this seems like a war of long ago, im drawn to poetry like this, i have images of knights and battlefields in my mind, {if im way off sorry}, though truely i think its one of your most beautiful poems ive yet read:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: White Clouds
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:40:45 AM AEST
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My friend, I could read your war stories over and over and never tire of them.
Very, very well done
Barkeep, a drink for this talented man
Larry |
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Re: White Clouds
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by venkat on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:31:13 AM AEST
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| Beautifull..in each cloud to see the face and its smile..simply wonderful.. venkat |
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Re: White Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:34:22 AM AEST
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War is always devastating for both side, no matter who wins. This is a very deep and powerful write which describes an evil destroying our world today. War only begats war.
Rita |
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Re: White Clouds
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:07:13 AM AEST
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felt like i was up there, very good write old chap, i hear by revoke your deportation order and welcome you back to the motherland(ha! that should get a response in oz!) i would like to bestow on you the title of britpoet 2004.
What you refuse? i'm so surprised!
wildejohnny.
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Re: White Clouds
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:39:38 AM AEST
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| A poem that speaks a thousand words ... to everyone a different meaning, but to me more than words can express ... beautiful write ... Jan |
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