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Don't Dare
Contributed by
Crys
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:03:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The air runs short,
My breathing ceases.
Darkness settles upon me.
This life of sort
Slowly releases
And the ice circulates in me.
My vision blurs,
The tears are falling.
My body is getting numb.
I speak in slurs,
Your name, I’m calling,
Ready to succumb.
Then you’re there,
Reaching for me,
To love and to comfort.
You gave me a scare,
Can it be?
Are you my one consort?
The air returns,
My breathing resumes.
The darkness is lifted from me.
For you, I’ve yearned,
But had assumed,
You were just a dream.
My vision is clear,
I see love!
I’ve awakened from the nightmare!
I whisper, “My dear”,
And wrap you in a hug.
“Don’t leave me again…
Don’t dare…”
Copyright ©
Crys
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2004-03-25 03:03:11]
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Re: Don't Dare
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:31:24 AM AEST
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| vivid beautifully expressed feelings, lovely, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Don't Dare
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 04:29:03 AM AEST
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PRETTY NICE-I LIKES IT ALOT! THAT SEEMS TO BE SOMEONES BEST POEMS,THE ONES YOU WRITE SO FAST & BARELY THINKING ABOUT IT!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Don't Dare
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by Butterat_Zool on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:02:52 AM AEST
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| What a nice poem... You have some great ideas here... the suspense, the worry... lovely... Butterat Zool. |
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