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Oh Honey what you do to me.
Contributed by
rhymeandreason
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 12:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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It started with a flash of thigh.
(she was sitting on a bench)
That's all it took. I won't lie.
Watching skirt rise inch by inch.
Oh honey,
what you do to me ,
you don't understand.
Your a tempting woman,
and i'm a tempted man.
Now, a tempting woman,
and a tempted man.
Honey, can't you see?
With something like you
to keep me going,
honey what you do to me!
With legs so long and slender,
lips so red and full.
She makes it hard,
oh so hard,
for me to keep my cool.
every thoughts about her,
and evry thoughts on fire.
The only thing I know for sure.
Is that i'm filled with desire.
She smiles at me no longer! I do not understand.
Then, I know.
I took too long.
She's smiling at another man.
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2004-03-25 12:44:07]
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Re: Oh Honey what you do to me.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 01:35:50 PM AEST
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| Sensual and enticing. I couldn't help but smile at the end I thought it was great! Although not so great for you. I liked this one alot. I like all writes by you! Lots of talent you have. Kie |
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Re: Oh Honey what you do to me.
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:46:09 PM AEST
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| You have such a way with words ... this one leaves me smiling broadly ... great write ... Jan |
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