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The Vow
Contributed by
typodemon
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:06:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In the morning dew, I saw doves fly
They fly toured the rising sun, witch blinded me like non
As my eyes grew accustomed, it was not the sun the color of custard
But a women of such great beauty, that I went to her intuitively
Apoun one knee I went, my pants I hope not wet
In my pocket lay a ring, with a slight ding
Not a gift for one such as she, but better to giver it to her then a he
With sweet on my brow, I look up to her frown
Arise my knight, she said with a fright
For I wish you to stand with me, not kneel in front of me
I arose from the ground, and brought forth the ring I found
Apoun her finger I place it, with great hast I state
For a creatcher such as thou, I give this vow
Forever true I shall be, forever more with thee
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Re: The Vow
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 02:26:30 PM AEST
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| wow that was beautiful. thats a great vow. great write. ;) |
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Re: The Vow
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 03:05:19 PM AEST
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always the romantic you got that from me
Love
Mom |
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