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Its Only Suicide
Contributed by
ItsRayningTonite
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Does it really matter
The tear that rolls down my cheek
Do you even care
That I'm crying as we speak
Can you even notice
How I choke on every word
Every gasping breath
I suppose you never heard
With every creak in the stairs
As I walk to my room
A clear black circle
The isolating doom
Does it matter at all...
The rope hanging from my ceiling
My soon to be fate
Do you care what I might be feeling?
But I suppose that I'm alone
This pain will not subside
As I make the final jump
Its ONLY suicide
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2004-03-25 17:43:21]
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Re: Its Only Suicide
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by afraid_of_fear on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 05:54:04 PM AEST
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Wow.. this is so powerful and full of emotion.. a really good write, i hope it is just fiction..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Its Only Suicide
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by emphaticplacebo on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:23:48 AM AEST
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| great write! very powerful and raw with emotion, i really liked reading it, and I hope whatever is causing these feelings subsides soon, keep up the good work |
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