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Even in Death
Contributed by
Soulless
on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 08:56:40 PM in AEST
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Some say Im crazy, driven to insanity
They tell me Im lost
In the unforgiven past
They're all wrong
Restless nights I feel your presence
An essence I cannot mistake
I can remember your face
The one thing I could never forsake
I can see your haunting me
Its only me you want
They can't feel you touching me
And they dont hear you singing to me
I will stay forever here with you
My love
Come find me with out fear
My love
Dont let me see a single tear
For
I'll be waiting here
Tonight
And forever
Your shadow hides within these walls
I know your waiting for me
Your voice it softly calls
I can hear you singing to me
I will stay forever here with you
My love
Come find me with out fear
My love
Dont let me see a single tear
For
I'll be waiting here
Tonight
And forever
I will always love you
And I cant love you anymore than I do now
Your face follows me wherever I go
It never stops haunting me
Lost words whisper back steady and slow
These soflty spoken words you give me
I will stay forever here with you
My love
Come find me with out fear
My love
Dont let me see a single tear
For
I'll be waiting here
Tonight
And forever
My dreams lead me to where you lay
Your words whisper back in my head
Come join me here tonight
My love
I've been waiting all my life
so
Join me in the light
And stay with me
Tonight
And forever
For even in death
Our love goes on~
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-03-25 20:56:40]
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Re: Even in Death
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:55:48 PM AEST
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excellent, breathtakingly beautifully written, i was feeling every word, i simply adore this poem, as i have the same in my life, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Even in Death
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by Eve on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:31:09 PM AEST
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A few of these lines were, quite bluntly, stolen from "Even in Death" by Evanescence. Therefore, this isn't fully your work. If I'm not mistaken, this is plagiarism to some extent. The words to Evanescence's version;
"Give me a reason to believe that you're gone
I see your shadow so I know they're all wrong
Moonlight on the soft brown earth
It leads me to where you lay
They took you away from me but now I'm taking you home
I will stay forever here with you
My love
The softly spoken words you gave me
Even in death our love goes on
Some say I'm crazy for my love
My love
But no bonds can hold me from your side
My love
They don't know you can't leave me
And they can't hear you singing to me
And I can't love you anymore than I do"
Don't you think there's something wrong with your poem taking some of that?
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Re: Even in Death
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:48:59 PM AEST
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all I can say is if it's stolen you are a thief....if its your own work you are one hell of a writer. Time will tell on both accounts my friend.
Larry |
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Re: Even in Death
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:11:24 AM AEST
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this *****es me off....just a little maybe because even in death is my favorite song ever ever ever!!!!
...keep writing....
...but get your own stuff...
--Rianne Ashleigh |
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Re: Even in Death
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:36:32 PM AEST
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Dear Viewers,
I apologize deeply If I have offended anyone. This poem was not to make fun of or harm any lyrics of Evanescence. On the contrary, Evanescence is my favorite band and the reason I started this poem was under the influence of their song "Even in Death" I have posted this poem on other websites before and I always remembered to add a disclaimer of how not all was my work. Yesterday I was in a bit of a hurry and I had forgotten to add the extra note claiming as shown. I once again apologize and I assure you that the rest of my work is my own words. I hope you can forgive me and if not I understand.
Yet once again am utterly sorry.
And especially, I appologize to Evanescence for forgeting this major problem.
Love,
~Soulless~
(If anyone could tell me how to modify my poem to add the note I would apreciate it.)
Thank you for pointing that out. I feel so embarassed! :(
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Re: Even in Death
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:44:40 PM AEST
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This Was Great But I'll Have To Agree
With Everyone...Please Keep Writing
But Only In Your Own Words.
I Think You Have That Special Talent
In You To Do So.And I Accept Your Apology
{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}
,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,, |
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Re: Even in Death
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:13:20 PM AEST
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Thanks angel. I appreciate your acceptance to my appology.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Even in Death
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by blueheart on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:01:24 PM AEST
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| You apologized for your mistake and its accepted. Good write. |
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Re: Even in Death
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by Eve on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:18:43 PM AEST
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In response to the apology, I understand. As long as you only forgot the disclaimer, it's fine. I think you're supposed to put lyrics written by others in quotes... that way your own words can reflect off of theirs. I don't think you can modify your poem, but you could likely post it again?
Keep writing,
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Re: Even in Death
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:46:56 AM AEST
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this was amazing. I couldn't tell if it was written to someone whom u love, or someone that u lost, but can't get over in any case it was awesome. It reminded me of CuttersAngel's poetry for some wierd reason.
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