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See in her
Contributed by
Chicken
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Thursday, 19th September 2002 @ 08:20:22 PM in AEST
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I see in her a girl I can never have
A love that could never exist.
Everyone says I should break my oath
And go pursue her guilded love.
Only I believe interference to be the wrong way.
For to me she's more than a lover or friend,
She's a sister I cannot afford to lose.
I know she can see the abysmal depths of my soul
And the capabilities that lie therein.
She cannot possibly long for a monster such as me.
So I shy away and run to the shadows
Hiding myself once again in my pain,
Not caring for the blood that suppurates from my heart...
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Chicken
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2002-09-19 20:20:22]
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Re: See in her
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by chatabox on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 03:30:03 AM AEST
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yes, its a fine line between between friendship and lover sometimes. Would it ruin things if you made a move though?
Lovely write,
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Re: See in her
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by Chicken on
Friday, 20th September 2002 @ 07:20:56 AM AEST
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| It probably would ruin things...i can't risk it |
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Re: See in her
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by ginsdance on
Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 01:17:49 PM AEST
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But didn't you tell me??? Great write Drew2! And always remember, I don't bite, so don't be afraid to tell me anything!
Ginny |
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