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Desperation
Contributed by
Soulless
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 09:26:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ok, I enjoy writing dark poetry. And this is one of them.
Walls of corruption stand around me
My ancient world lay below
Dont let them fall upon me
Fight the urge of letting go
Trying to peel the truth beneath the lies
Separate monstrosity of my world
Distortion of this life I despise
Reality now has come mixed and twirled
Im stranded in this relentless nightmare
Emitting every color beneath my own
Stabalize the damage that need repair
And withstand these walls of desperation
Plunging into shadows of my faults
wading in my ignorant darkness
My fears are tearing down against me
Looming in favor of immortality
Taste the sap of sweet revenge
My little world is closing in
Ripping me they shall avenge
This bloody sorrow simmers thin
Trying to peel the truth beneath the lies
Separate monstrosity of my world
Distortion of this life I despise
Reality now has come mixed and twirled
Im stranded in this relentless nightmare
Emitting every color beneath my own
Stabalize the damage that need repair
And withstand these walls of desperation
For here now my debt repaid
I yearn to leave my eternal separation
Away it all shall fade
I cannot burn this inner desperation
Now I let the whispers take me
Drap me deeper among the darkness
Taking along the somber glory
As my senseless thoughts tarnish
Copyright ©
Soulless
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2004-03-25 21:26:43]
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Re: Desperation
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:31:29 PM AEST
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| Great write!!! You have a wonderful talent and a definate way with words... I look forward to reading more by you! |
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Re: Desperation
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:15:26 AM AEST
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So very awesome. Grear write i am definetely going to read more of your writes.
Amy~ |
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Re: Desperation
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by blueheart on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 07:25:33 AM AEST
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| Very descriptive. Amazing, I loved every bit of it. |
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Re: Desperation
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 08:34:51 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write I Loved It.
Look Forward To Reading More Of Your Poems.
You Have The Talent Of A Great Writer
Keep Em Coming.
,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,, |
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Re: Desperation
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by arden on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:10:43 PM AEST
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you have a great talent. this was so awesome! i loved it. im speechless wow..
Arden |
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Re: Desperation
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:28:09 AM AEST
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| ah! im a little jealous....vary vary good write |
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Re: Desperation
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:10:31 PM AEST
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This is awesome.. i'll be keeping an eye out for more from you :)
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Desperation
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 12:58:46 AM AEST
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this was awesome I'm not quite sure how to respond intelligently to this... so I'll just say that i think you write dark poetry the best.
Bobo (Joel) |
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