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There He Goes
Contributed by
Schnikes13
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Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:53:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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There he goes
Just walking on by again
The image burned into my brain
And I just cant contain
All these feelings that remain
There he goes
Just smiling brightly again
The feeling running through my veins
And I just cant contain
All these feelings that remain
Surprise me, with your unorthodox way
Impress me, with your reasons to stay
There he goes
Just laughing loud again
The sound echoing in my ears
And I just cant contain
All these feelings that remain
There he goes
Just running far again
The breeze whipping through my hair
And I just cant contain
All these feelings that remain
Hes there running, running through the rain
Nobody else could ever heal my pain
There he goes
Just leading me on again
The strings of my heart tightening
And I just cant contain
All these feelings that remain
He calls my name,
Through the rain;
Nothings the same,
No one else could heal my pain
There he goes
Secretly loving me again
The smile on my face growing
Because I just cant contain
All those feelings that remain
Copyright ©
Schnikes13
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2004-03-25 22:53:21]
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Re: There He Goes
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 25th March 2004 @ 10:56:27 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful... great job |
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Re: There He Goes
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:27:44 AM AEST
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Very, very good! Complex, which fits perfectly with the stricter rhyme scheme. Great job.
Take care. Keep your hope up. Wonderful things happen once in a while.
Andrew |
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