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Deaths Winning.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:20:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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no soul, having me,
no soul, wanting me,
no soul, holding me,
to, many,
shadows hanging over me.
no one, seeing me,
no one, reaching me,
no one, loving me,
to many,
echoes pulling onto me.
too many thought stabbing into me,
that when you look at me,
you see...
me in pieces,
with shadows eating me,
with all my blood swamped around me....
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2004-03-26 04:20:09]
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Re: Deaths Winning.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:23:12 AM AEST
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ive been so uninspired lately but i feel a lot like this. if only i could put the way i feel into words. i like the way you did because its so raw and so true.
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