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i want you near

Contributed by angelface2 on Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

i want you near
i could hear your voice that sounded so near
but the words i could not make out
the words which were spoken we not clear
all i could do was shout

visions of you started to appear
in every direction
i wanted you to be here
so i could feel your affection

all mixed feelings were running through my head
everything words i heard kept being said
i wanted to see and touch your face
to do so i would do whatever it takes

i kept calling out your name
but everything remained the same
no visions no words nothing
my hand was out but it was touching nothing

i fell to my knees and pleaded
to come back i never wanted to lose you
the same my tears proceeded
i have no idea what to do

everything went quiet
nothing i could hear
my hopes came back dispite
what happened with all the tears

there you were your face and smile
tears began to flow while i watched you
i missed you so much and its been a while
so i had no idea what to do

i just sat there crying and stunned
now i wished i never took that gun
what did i do what was i thinking
my whole life was perfect now its sinking

i had everything anyone wanted but i killed myself for no reason
my heart at which i shot stopped but my soul is bleeding
i just sat there doing nothing not against my will
i now realized suicide kills
more than one
its kills all the fun
for everyone

Copyright © angelface2 ... [ 2004-03-26 12:01:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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