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Revenge
Contributed by
liquidchaos
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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if i live my life in disregard
ignoring every word you say
mistakes arise from nothingness
and everything stays the same
without a purpose or reason
i'll live in constant carelesness
own my own sweet sorrow
why must things be so meaningless?
i think it's all my fault
but you won't leave me alone
i want to end it all right now
you'll be better off with her.
so go enjoy her company
you know it's what you want
leave me here to nurse the wound
of a knife protruding from my back.
i hope it's you who finds me first
blood splatter on the wall
a smoking gun lies on the floor
an empty stare greets yours.
i hope you're horrified.
weep bitter tears of regret
as the crimson meets your eyes
and you pry this paper from my hand.
goodbye.
Copyright ©
liquidchaos
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2004-03-26 12:27:02]
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Re: Revenge
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by Broken-glass on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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| Interesting and insightful, I enjoyed this. Keep writing, Broken-Glass |
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Re: Revenge
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by Stitch on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:38:12 PM AEST
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Edgey stuff. The feelings are genuinely portrayed. Writing is such a catharsis. (I keep saying that, don't I?) OK, this is impressive.
Stitch |
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Re: Revenge
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by emphaticplacebo on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:43:12 AM AEST
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| very deep stuff. Great write, I really enjoyed reading it.. look forward to seeing more. |
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Re: Revenge
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by pinkashes on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:24:01 AM AEST
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addie,
i love it, funny how i've felt the same kinda thing before, i've just written it down different, you're awesome, don't stop writting. ash |
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