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The miracle of death
Contributed by
silent
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 12:44:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We are created, and so it begins
Pure to begin with, limbs being made
We become complete, tainted with life
Becoming trapped, needing escape
Along the path to the outside world
Mother sensing her baby is near
Longing to hold, to be near, so much love to give
Pushed along the canal of life, cannot slow down, or turn around
Sensing the end, the light ahead beckons joy nearing completion
Longing for mother, birth has been
Both together at last, never to return, finally free, eternally free......
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2004-03-26 12:44:44]
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Re: The miracle of death
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:12:20 PM AEST
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| wonderful, read it a few times, i see much more each time, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The miracle of death
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by Remi on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 02:18:46 PM AEST
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This is very beatiful and the emotion is great behind it
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Re: The miracle of death
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:49:19 PM AEST
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WoW Great , Awesome Write
Loved It...I Enjoyed This Poem
I'm Like Nessa I Read It Several Times Already..
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,
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Re: The miracle of death
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by Stitch on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:50:06 PM AEST
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Goodness! This poem made me put my hand over my mouth. What insight and power. I really like this. You have a keen sense of what is at the essence of life.
Nice work.
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