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life moves along
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:29:47 PM in AEST
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two people fall in love
two people buy a house
two people become one
one couple buys a pupp
life moves along
the man goes to work
the lady is soon with child
the pupp makes monsterous
holes in the garden
life moves along
the daddy goes to work
the mommy runs in circles
older sister plays dress up the dog
little brother finds his feet
life moves along
daddy builds a treehouse
out of the dog's house
mommy frowns on this
kids laugh and won't come in
life moves along
daddy gets a better job
the mommy molds minds
older sister goes to school
the boys take things apart
life moves along
daddy's runnin' the road again
mommy is baking more pies
kids are all in bed dreaming
the dog's watching tv
life moves along
daddy's truck jacks at 3am
mommy falls into a heep
baby thinks hes coming home
dog howls for days; wont sleep
life moves along
mommy dusts daddy's urn
older sister is in love
brother has a new life
baby not a baby anymore
life moves along
old woman joins her mate
sister feels it getting late
brothers too buzy to be blue
new pupp chews a shoe
life moves along
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Re: life moves along
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by Necromant on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 01:58:59 PM AEST
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Oh my what a poem! Very sad but the ending made me smile :). Awesome write!
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by spicey_one on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:21:24 PM AEST
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| i think this is a very good poem! it makes people think abotu life - as a big picture - it makes you get over little things in life... goes life moves along.... i think its a great poem! good job |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:23:00 PM AEST
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There is more to this just just a truth of life....there is a large piece of your life in it too.
Never fair is it ((nessa))
beautifully done
Roses
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:54:41 PM AEST
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| Gosh, isn't it SO like that...this makes me feel how small we are in the signifance of even one family..we have our use then go. Wow. Powerful stuff xxx |
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by shelby on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:56:24 PM AEST
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Nessa this gave me chills its so bittersweet
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:28:55 PM AEST
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definitely got me thinking about my own mortality good poem.
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by Kie on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:45:13 PM AEST
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This has a country song feel to it. The truth makes for some of the greatest songs although so much hurt has to happen to make one it seems sometimes. I loved this poem and it seems unfair that so many tragedies have come your way. Yet you manage to write beautiful poetry that always speaks of the good things. You are one strong woman Nessa and an incredible Poetess. Kie
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:48:39 PM AEST
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This is great hun, but that last bit wont happen for at least another hundred years if i can help it! *grins*
the world would be lost without you
Love 'n Hugs
- Becca
P.S. FOODS OUT! |
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by Angelic_Demon on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:52:15 PM AEST
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'Nother great one, mom. But if you plan on going anywhere soon I personally plan on haunting you in the afterlife. :P
*grins*
Hugs an' love,
Mars |
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:54:53 PM AEST
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| very very very very good and moving nessa. i thought it was amazing. life does move on although sometimes it doesnt seem like it will. :) good job |
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:37:25 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this is a beautiful write. I think it was cute. Loved it. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: life moves along
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:58:35 AM AEST
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The unending circle of life. Only the people and places change at times. It does continue, with or without us.
Rainbows,
Rita |
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:01:13 AM AEST
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Life indeed moves along...such is the vagaries of life...very pragmatic and practical take on the slew of life.
A torrential stream
"life moves along"
what begins must soon end.
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by venkat on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:03:07 AM AEST
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Change is the law of life..some times sad changes take place while we are hoping for good..and life moves along....
"mommy dusts daddy's urn...older sister is in love..brother has a new life..baby not a baby anymore"...these are glaring changes.
venkat
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:10:47 AM AEST
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Life's Merry Go 'Round......meeting ourselves coming and going...life moves along
Life hands many surprizes, many sad, some glad......but it's not the rain that falls, but how well you handle the swell.......my 95 year old grandma taught me that. After raising 10 children!
But Life moves on and 100 years for now....who will know. It's all vanity anyway!
Wonderful thoughful and honest write Nessa
Loved it as it nicely flowed along
Great!
love you too
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by emystar on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 03:29:30 AM AEST
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Very creative, my friend.
Luv, huggs,
emy
Thanks for your comment on my write. |
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:10:00 AM AEST
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Nessa-What an intriguimg poem! It's really great...i loved how your words just flowed and how powerful your delivery really was...excellent job!
faith |
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:47:59 AM AEST
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| That was an awesome poem, it really made me think about how fast life flies without us even knowing it. Take care! |
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:31:09 AM AEST
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| that poems a trip...its like a story that you get sucked into |
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:45:12 PM AEST
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aww wow what can i say? another incredible write by an incredible poetess :)
charlotte x_x_x |
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by Merry on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:52:18 PM AEST
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This is an exquisite write Nessa - tender and thoughtful - a picture of a family - through good times and bad - you're talent is awesome!!!!!!
hugs
merry |
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:04:17 PM AEST
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Nessa Such Great Write..I Enjoyed Reading It...
Wish I Had The Talent That Most Of You
All Have On Here....LoL My Poems Suck!!!!!!!
,,,,,,,,,,,LoVe,,,,,AnGeL,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 01:34:43 PM AEST
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Oh Ness.... beautifully done...tho I know there is so much truth to it.... Must have been hard for you...but you have so much left.... treasure it all.....
Hugs and woofies...Jenni |
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by twinkletoes on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 07:27:35 PM AEST
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an insight intoa life is always precious to those who see gold when others see yellow. thanks for the window....
tt |
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by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 02:36:54 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Mars... but tis a great poem.... *feels all insignificant*
*J* |
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 02:04:16 AM AEST
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WOW WHAT A WRITE! IT'S CUTE BUT SAD!!
BUT I THINK IT'S PRETTY!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 07:09:52 PM AEST
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((((((((NESSA))))))))))
Yes it dones move along....good times, bad times..we just keep plugging there...well written
Shari |
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 02:05:37 AM AEST
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This is beautiful ladyfawn as always!!! And true... life always moves along, with or without you. Each of us has to make the decision to keep going with it. Beautiful!!! Bravo!!!
Ginsdance |
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 03:37:32 AM AEST
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Very good one here. It's very creative.
definently a masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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by arden on
Monday, 5th April 2004 @ 06:42:23 PM AEST
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truly a unique poem. just awesome. i loved this. well written. i wish i could write like you.
great poem.
Arden |
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by silent on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 01:05:03 AM AEST
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So indeed life does move along like that, you capture so well, with a great deal of insight and vivid imagery, well done.
Silent |
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by blueheart on
Monday, 12th April 2004 @ 11:16:49 PM AEST
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| Well there you go, you summed up the circle of life. Nice poem. :) |
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