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3 words
Contributed by
spicey_one
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:30:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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your voice haunts me
it hurts more then a knife with a jagged edge
twisting and pulling at my skin
your words burn into my mind
leaving imprints that last
Forever
weakening my spirit and soul
no one know the things i have heard
no on knows the war i have walked through
no on knows expect me -
'till the day i die
only i will remember the hate you have thrown at me
and it will matter to no one but me
so until the day i die -
I Hate You
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spicey_one
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2004-03-26 15:30:16]
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Re: 3 words
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:38:24 PM AEST
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| nice delievery. a good display of sounding your hurt. |
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Re: 3 words
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by Lionel on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 03:45:06 PM AEST
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| Ouch. I wouldn't want to be in his shoes. |
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Re: 3 words
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:39:35 AM AEST
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| ooooo when i saw the title i was thinking the 3 words would be 'i love you' lol, i was surprized, great expression of feelings, may your heart be happy:) hugs n' love nessa |
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