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I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
Contributed by
Aika
on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:14:47 PM in AEST
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I planted the tree
And watched it grow
bloomes smelled lovely
sweet fruits rumoured
pieces of many colours
and tongue longing
which one my hand touches
I want to eat
My heart was telling
Dont eat this piece
But brain was sure
Im that one who this needs
When for the first time
Body was in cramps
Heart was crying
But brain was silent
So where to find now
The medicine to be saved
Why does not tell my heart
Has it some secret?
With hand shaking
Touching another piece
Will I be suffering
Or heal my body?
no,told me my heart
Its not the colour
Nor what these look like,
I recognize the danger
I tell you in time
Just listen to me
Dont rely upon brain
My voice is here
I obey my heart
Even if time to time
My body is in cramps
Thats price of life
Much less fruits
My tree is now giving
But much better tastes
The real knowledge
Zasadila jsem strom
A radovala se, e roste
Květy voněly ndherně,
zvěst sladkho ovoce
plody různch barev
a jazček mlsn,
na kter ruka shne,
ten v mch stech skonč
srdce mi radilo,
tenhle kus nechutnej,
vak rozumu cos velilo
j jsem ten hladovej
poprv se tělo
svjelo v křečch
srdce plakalo
ale rozum se utiil
tak kde ten lk,kde
mm teď j najt
proč mlč srdce
snad mi něco taj?
rukou roztřesenou teď
Sahm pro dal plod
Budu zas trpět
Nebo uzdravm tělo?
srdce řeklo: ne,
barvou to nen
i pohled tě zklame
j vm o nebezpeč
řeknu ti včas,
jen poslouchej
sly můj hlas
na rozum nedej
poslouchm, co mi řk
i kdy chvlemi
bolest se svrm
tak bol ponaučen
mnohem mně ovoce
můj strom teď plod
vak o to lep je
chuť zdravho poznn
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-03-26 16:14:47]
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:16:02 PM AEST
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very pretty, as are all your poems alena, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:39:38 AM AEST
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Aika, this is beautiful,
Our hearts can be treacherous, or they can be our guide.
Think with you mind, never lead with your heart......for our desires, our mind will tell us which is right or which is wrong...
This was a very thought provoking poem, Aika....very deep, and I enjoyed it very much.
Love you
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by corrupted_minds on
Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 07:22:31 AM AEST
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| nice just nice |
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 11th April 2004 @ 05:46:19 PM AEST
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| It's always worth taking a chance- even if the outcome almost kills you. VERY nicely written! |
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Re: I planted the tree Zasadila jsem strom
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:45:58 AM AEST
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To taste the pleasant fruit is wonderful, yet sometimes in order to know what is good we have to taste the unpleasant and bad.
A lesson we all learn in life
steve
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