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In search of
Contributed by
neglected1
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 04:33:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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steadily standing
grasping for what i feel is right
give into this hate inside
living in this world of pain
painted a new picture that makes me sick
i know you will complete this work started within
exposed by the light
true colors ascend
put down by my peers and my so called friends
in my mind im just blind
you got it all figured out while everyone is confused
if i think for myself
i guess im out of line
with every word
you poison my mental process
negativity being the main substance
with lifting hands ill stay in faith
ill never be one of them
i sit inside my wall of shame
it could be my mind that's got me all choked up inside
chains that bind together the things i want to change
if i breathe too hard
it'll turn into my mental illness
fight the words in my head
screaming i'm better off dead
whatever demon your seeking you'll find
i know i found mine
burn the taste of all away
no need to ask just where or when ill find myself again
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Re: In search of
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by Aika on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 05:08:49 PM AEST
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| so very very full of pain! but great write! love, aika:-) |
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Re: In search of
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:14:09 PM AEST
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| I liked it, but in parts I felt like I was jumping. Don't get me wrong it was good, but, well I guess I wish I could understand it better. |
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