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The Long Road
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:23:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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You asked me what stresses me
it's you, this life, and unknowns
you try and try to get closer
won't you just leave me alone
you strike out at my father
my stepmom and her ways
you had no right to say that
will you ever end this craze
I've decided to take the long road
i'll find out my own path
i'll speak my mind and p*ss you off
and leave behind my wraith
i'm onward to a happier life
these sores are festering
i'll determine my future now
it's my own destiny
Copyright ©
kailadragon
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2004-03-26 18:23:21]
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Re: The Long Road
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by neglected1 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:32:34 PM AEST
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Im sorry for your pain that you are finally uncovering.. but the inner self is the best pressiance of a dayum good writter.. your poem is very heartfelt and i highly enjoyed reading it..
luck to you hun-e
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Re: The Long Road
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 06:33:11 PM AEST
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parents are just as confussed. give her time, like you wish she would give you. As for negativity towards your father and stepmother, well your mother has feeling to, and even though it's not the right way that is how she has chosen to hide and deal with her hurt.
if you could sometime sit down with and talk. not raise voices, not argue, but talk. it might be nice to ask her how she feels. take care. |
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