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Dying Away
Contributed by
essentially9
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Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:33:47 PM in AEST
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Dying Away
I wish these feelings
Would die away
But I'm the one dying
These feelings stay
Lost in the depths of them
I cant reach the top
From the ground
I can't take anymore
I have given up short
I can't take anymore
I have given up more
Tomorrow knows
The fate of the next day
Today is just passing
The past just fading
As I near tomorrow
Another part of me fades
Another part dies away
I can't handle the loss
With each second
I'm fading into myself
And away from life
I'm fading from everything
And no one can stop me
I can't stop myself
From dying away
I can't stop these feelings
I get caught in them
And I can't reach above them
The day these feelings stop
Is the day I die away
Forever away
That day is coming soon
And the feelings will end
But till that day
I'll just drown in them
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Re: Dying Away
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 11:37:25 PM AEST
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| Wow! What an emotional write!!! It was very good. You described your feelings very well. Keep up the great work! |
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Re: Dying Away
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:45:34 AM AEST
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Very ,Very Emotional Write
Truely Great Tho.
Loved It...
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}}
,,,,,,LoVe,,,,AnGeL,,,,, |
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