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Sacrifice
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:57:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I look into a deep dark sky
and sit alone and fret
I used to see the stars above, but now I ponder where they went
The world is just so simple, and yet there's pain we must endure
There's problems always rising not knowing where there from
I wish I had the answers to take away your pain
Instead I'll sit here waiting hoping that your safe
I shed a tear to watch you smile, but you 'll never know
the pain that I endured for you, because Im all alone.
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-03-27 00:57:24]
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Re: Sacrifice
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:33:21 AM AEST
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| I'VE OFTEN DONE THE SAME I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO THIS WRITE-GREAT READ-GREAT WRITE |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 10:27:28 PM AEST
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| man that feeling sucks doesnt it? my advise is to just go ahead and tell the world how you feel...vary capturing poem...keep it up |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:56:24 PM AEST
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| In spite of your feelings at the time of writing this very good poem keep smiling it helps a lot cheers from bernard. |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 01:57:16 PM AEST
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| it's interesting. you've made a copy of my life right now. i'm worried about another memeber on this site. only i've never seen her before. we just write though email. |
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Re: Sacrifice
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th April 2004 @ 03:01:37 PM AEST
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One of the greatest things a person can do is doing something for someone else, without their knowledge. It is really hard, though.
Well written!
Take care.
David |
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