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I Say Goodbye
Contributed by
Dereku
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:06:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ive said my Im sorry. s
Ive wallowed in my regrets
I just dont care anymore
This is just one big lost bet
I understand now some things arent meant to be
I cared for her so much; she just couldnt feel the same for me
Ive dropped all my losses; Im going on with life
I just really dont need all of this strife
This is my last goodbye, my final farewell
Shes already gotten over me, or can I just not tell?
So to those reading this, remember Im happy now
This is where Ill smile and take my last bow
Im leaving you all to find just one place
Where maybe Ill be happy, where I might see her smiling face
Copyright ©
Dereku
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2004-03-27 01:06:10]
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Re: I Say Goodbye
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 12:09:19 PM AEST
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| I like your poem. It is very unique. Nice job!!!.-luckycharm. |
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Re: I Say Goodbye
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by Kie on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:55:14 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem alot. I think you did a fantastic job and i'm impressed with this being your first time. I look forward to the next one. Kie |
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Re: I Say Goodbye
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:06:38 AM AEST
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::i wish more people would write like this:: what? :) nice job indeedy
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