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My Cloud
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:45:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Could you survive the fury of love?
None other but mine-
which my blood has proven to be true-
and groovy things soon began to happen-
and still happen;
in bright colored pastels
that pass on clouds- on my cloud
which I invite you to share.
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
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2004-03-27 04:45:10]
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Re: My Cloud
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:57:12 AM AEST
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| true love? |
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Re: My Cloud
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 08:26:32 AM AEST
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| Wow! Short but it holds a lot of beauty. |
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Re: My Cloud
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by AnGeL_M on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 09:36:20 AM AEST
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This Is Lovely
Awesome Write...I Like This..
{{{{{{ Hugs }}}}}}}
,,,,,LoVe,,,AnGeL,,,,, |
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Re: My Cloud
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:15:24 PM AEST
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| I like the choice of words and especially the pastel part... true love definatly passes on pastel clouds.... beautiful... :) |
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