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over, pleaz just leave
Contributed by
ml03
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:12:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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no more no you ain't comin' back into my life won't be down on my knees break a sweat for ya won't let ya back to rip my heart out and walk over it
tears i've cried nights we fought till the cock crowed you always thought you were right but you always turned out to be wrong
i said i loved you and thats why i stayed let you treat me like s*** we fought about it night and day until you made one big mistake knocked me down and you hit me you dirrrty damn bum no matter what you had no reason ever to lay a fist on me and i wasn't goin to lay there get black and blue i'm no dumb fool so you know i fought back the vase shattered against your face oops i bet that hurt but ya know i felt enpowered got the stegthen to leave you battered and bruised bye bye
now you walk in tryin' to say you love me and need me and all i can think is you love me thats why i got a black eye and a busted lip b/c you ****in' love me well you got a weird way of showin' it black and blue never screamed love, need, passion, want so i'm tellin you to leave that its over not one more word or tear for you
so why won't you walk out that door without a fight i said no and no means no no mores games no more yellin' and screamin' to get your attention make you listen no more pain and anger no more black and blue this black and white put it in print no more its over i don't need you
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Re: over, pleaz just leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:24:40 AM AEST (User
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Good for you!
Very good write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: over, pleaz just leave
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 04:50:53 PM AEST (User
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Oh what a strong poem! the messege is clear loved your style! Great write!
Anne :D |
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