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You have gone
Contributed by
dAWn
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:25:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You have gone
But still I feel your presence
Out of sight but not out of mind
I feel so alone
This is what Ill be sentenced (to)
You were the judge, still you were too kind
Broke my heart
You were on the other side of the river
Could not swim across, the flood would tear me down
Tore me apart
Seeing you made me shiver
But you would not hear my tormented moan
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dAWn
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2004-03-27 13:25:56]
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Re: You have gone
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:35:35 PM AEST
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| awww, expressed so well, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: You have gone
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 01:59:25 PM AEST
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| great write :) |
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Re: You have gone
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by faithmairee on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:47:00 PM AEST
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sad but hauntingly beautiful...well done!
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Re: You have gone
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 07:09:22 PM AEST
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and this one is pretty good, indeed!
ani nevim, co be tak bere na smutnejch basnickach jako je tahle, ale asi je to pro ten pocit najit v sobe vsechen smutek a na chvili ho na sebe nechat pusobit, aby, az mi zas bude fajn, byl ten pocit jeste silnejsi ;)
can't wait for your new ones!:D keep up the job...and especially the head, as I like to see your eyes :)
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