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Granite
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:43:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Bearing this strain is unbearible. The moisture has left my dying corpse. I linger on the edge of insanity and reality. Chasing each glance with a hollow stare. You bite the hand that feeds you, your a wreck. Losing choices and close friends, with each lie you've sewn. Only to meet your final resting place, under a slate of granite.
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2004-03-27 14:43:22]
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Re: Granite
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 02:47:33 PM AEST
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Hauntingly beautiful write. i love the strong emotion woven into that piece.
Clearly your writing is very unique,
Cant wait to see more of it.
Welcome to your-poetry.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: Granite
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:36:03 PM AEST
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| wonderful:) welcome to ypdc too, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Granite
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 4th April 2004 @ 08:16:44 PM AEST
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wow it says so much in so little. very good write, mortis. i really enjoy your unique style of writing.
Lindsey |
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