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Contributed by
little_genna
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Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:01:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Confused.
You make me crazy inside.
I don’t know what to do when I’m around you.
I just want you to hold me,
Kiss me.
It cannot be.
I hate this fact.
Confused!
All I want is to be free.
Give me my wings,
I need to fly from this nest of thought and,
Ridiculous feeling.
Need to scream,
At this crazy world of emotion!
Never to fall for one person,
Need to cry!
I just want you to hold me,
Kiss me.
It cannot be.
I hate this fact.
Confused!
Mixed emotions.
Give me some strength to go on,
All I want is to know,
Where to go from,
Here!
Confused.
You make me crazy inside.
I don’t know what to do when I’m around you.
I just want you to hold me,
Kiss me.
It cannot be.
I hate this fact.
Confused!
Too many erotic feelings,
Give me what I need.
To scream,
Cry and laugh,
Never to feel the truth of this,
Cruel, unfair world.
All I want is you.
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Re: You
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:45:08 PM AEST
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Absolutely enchanting the way your words create such a beautiful poem. I love this one.
I especially loved the last stanza,
"Too many erotic feelings,
Give me what I need.
To scream,
Cry and laugh,
Never to feel the truth of this,
Cruel, unfair world.
All I want is you."
Wonderful write once again.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: You
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by little_genna on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 05:52:33 PM AEST
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| my writing has never been described as enchanting. this gave me such a warm and happy feeling inside. as that was wrote about my experience i had today whilst i spent time with this 'nameless guy of inspiration'. |
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Re: You
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by Soulless on
Saturday, 27th March 2004 @ 06:12:44 PM AEST
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You clearly have a special talent for writing poetry, everyone of your poems was written in such emotion. I loved it.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: You
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by dolly_dagger on
Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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| yay 4 nameless guys of inspiration. they evoke the best poems |
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