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Would u.....
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:11:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Would u care if i told u
all the secrets of my heart
would u cry for me
if i was thorn apart
if i felt alone
will you be there to hold
would u keep me warm
if i was cold
if i smile
will u be happy too
will u love me
if i told u i loved u.
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Re: Would u.....
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:54:41 AM AEST
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| young...that was short but very very sweet. Loved it |
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Re: Would u.....
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:01:30 PM AEST
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I like this poem. It has everything it needs to answer to its title, and since I just wrote a poem with a question and answer session on love, I think u took an original swipe at an old and tired target, and hit it at a good angle.
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Re: Would u.....
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by AliB on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:45:00 PM AEST
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Brilliant, you could almost make that an addition to wedding vows if you changed the question bit if you know what I mean, anyway I liked this a lot, well done.
Ali xx |
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Re: Would u.....
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by MissMandy on
Tuesday, 15th January 2008 @ 06:46:37 PM AEST
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good job.
keep going. |
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