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no one wants to listen
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 03:26:23 AM in AEST
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he wanted to give a reason
he wanted to say goodbye
he wanted to say his final words
but no one wanted to listen
oh, everyone wanted to be a hero
and everyone wanted to save their own***
once the gun came out
but no one wanted to listen
too stupid to even realize
that he could have picked them off
one by one
if he'd wanted to
but the bullet he'd loaded that morning
was meant for only him
after he'd said his final words
words that no one ever heard
because no one wanted to listen
so in his mouth
went the end of the gun
and on the wall
went the back of his head
and he died choking on the bitter taste
of final words unsaid
because no one wanted to listen
his whole world ended
it all came to a halt
with that one loveless blast
and he died with no peace
he died with no closure
he died alone
because no one wanted to listen
so the next time a friend
has something on their mind
before you open your mouth
and speak from your behind
take a single moment
out of your pointless day
to shut the ***** up
and listen
because people are dying
cold and alone
with burdens on their heart
that they need express
but there's no one there
to share them with
because no one wants to listen
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-03-28 03:26:23]
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:36:13 AM AEST
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| oh hunny! that was written so perfectly and so tastefully. im listening. ;) Lay it on me brotha... thanks for sharing |
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by emystar on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:01:40 AM AEST
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So sad but so true.
We all should be reminded of this daily.
Good write.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by jaeann on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:30:22 AM AEST
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| your work profoundly amazes me.......this truth is one of the few reasons i keep coming back.......keep writing...... if you never post again my friend know you have a nodding head and an insightful tear some where in cally....... |
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:00:56 AM AEST
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Geez what a tragic poem! But so true no one wants to listen *sigh* Grand poem! Very well written!
Anne :D |
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:58:42 AM AEST
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I try to listen...but sadly, every last word of this is true. I can't recall being this worked up over a poem in quite a while. Excellent, i'm glad you decided to share this one.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by silent on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 07:02:03 AM AEST
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Perfect, conveys with such authority and anger what we all need to be aware of.
Really strong emotion in this one, brought it home very well, excellent.
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 10:55:24 AM AEST
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| WOW! That was great!!! Please don't stop posting. I like your poems!!! This opne was really good. I think I enjoyed it because I could identify. Great job! I hope to read more from you! |
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Re: no one wants to listen
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by AliB on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:49:27 PM AEST
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Wow indeed!!! Loved the flow of this, a sad tale which I'm sure goes on more than we know, I'm always listening.
Great work, hope you don't disappear from here.
Ali xx |
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