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No More Vegitables
Contributed by
strange_lindsey
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Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:31:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You keep sick company-
In the midst of your nervous breakdown, Sending a violent chill down your spine,
Think about what its going to be like
on the other side,
Slide back around and face front,
You have too much on your plate,
Give me that lazy eyed stare
Before you slip into darkness
for eternity...
Copyright ©
strange_lindsey
... [
2004-03-28 04:31:55]
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 04:47:28 AM AEST
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This is so different loved it, keep eating those veggies for insight! i wonder if you can overdose on broccoli? imagine if veg was illegal the fruit and veg man whispering out the corner of his mouth "pssst! wanna buy a quarter of carrots?"
nice one
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by silent on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:01:00 AM AEST
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yeah what wildejohnny said, lol..... very wierd and darkish write...
Interesting, very interesting. |
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by srugglingyoungster on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 05:56:46 AM AEST
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yeah, what they said. But out of my own words, its very cool and wierd. Kepp eating those vegies and writin' poems!
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 06:07:32 AM AEST
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| very deep and makes u think... nice work.... |
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 11:45:47 AM AEST
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| ive read this poem three times and each time it means more, and something a lill different, truely a thought provoking write, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 12:22:22 PM AEST
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this is -- well, I love it.!
Keep it up... great improvement from your angryprincess days.... |
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 03:56:38 AM AEST
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| Huh....I guess it takes all kinds when it comes to inspiration? Nice poem by the way, interesting that you came up with this by eating veggies. :) |
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Re: No More Vegitables
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Wednesday, 31st March 2004 @ 12:15:17 AM AEST
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| Awsome write! You described the emotions phenomonally! It's kinda creepy that I happened to read this poem today... I actually experienced this yesterday... in school. Now THAT was an interesting sight to see! lol. Great Job! I look forward to reading more of your poetry! |
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