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The Gem of the World
Contributed by
danimus
on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:19:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I once knew a girl
She was the gem
Of my world
But I won't see her again
She was more than a stone
My most prized possession
When I felt alone
Her sounds were more than a message
When I dug into
Unfamiliar grounds
And I discovered a jewl
A girl to completely love was found
Now I feel cold, Love sick
I've been told, To get over it
But I lost the other half of my heart
And I can't dig because I think its my fault
"She was more than a stone
My most prized possession
When I felt alone
Her sounds were more than a message"
I hope someday before I'm old
My gem will come back to be
The filler of a gap to my soul
And brighten my world for me
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danimus
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2004-03-28 13:19:56]
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Re: The Gem of the World
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by shelby on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 01:45:12 PM AEST
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I loved the way you compared a jem to your love hopefully you find your way to one another again
michelle |
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Re: The Gem of the World
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by Necromant on
Sunday, 28th March 2004 @ 02:33:24 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem! The poem is quite sad but the ending is really hopeful! Best wishes!
Anne :D |
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Re: The Gem of the World
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 11:25:31 PM AEST
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| I don't know how to rate it. But I think your poem is BEAUTIFUL! |
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